Mary Lou

Mary Lou

Sunday, March 2, 2014

Response to Mona

Mona, I agree with your thesis and points. Our interpretations of the book are similar and I think there is a lot of material we can cover. Choosing to base our paper on the Beat Generation will provide an opportunity to do interesting research on their ideals.
The only criticism I can make is on point four. I don't know if Jack's inability to have a personality has to do with social conformity or the Beat Generation's message. I would take that one out and stick with the other points about Neal. The rest of your points are strong and can be supported well.

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