Comment to Luis

I agree with your thesis and I know we've talked about this before in group discussions about how Neal is like the Gatsby to Jack. I think another point that you should add in their or mention is how Jack always had a lack of personality and let Neal and his friends kind of mold him into whatever they pleased. Jack was just always so willing to do whatever Neal wanted out of some form of envy. Otherwise, your other points are clear and I'm sure that once you've written out your full paragraphs, they'll offer great support to your thesis.